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May 6, 2007

Beast

Filed under: Sojourn — Tags: — Raja @ 2:57 PM

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Carrying the corpse of lonely monsoon breeze
and a thousand feminine lusts spurted
on me, since previous birth

The freedom of sky incarcerated in a solid blue wall
I’ll paint sunset on your dawn

.

[The Other Side (NOT written by me):

Farishta

Intezaar hai, tumhara
Aao, aur ek baar saare ankahe lafz sun lo
Saari khwaahishon ko samajh lo,
Zinda kar do mujhe
Bejaan aankhein panaah chaahti hain,
Thak chuki hai zindagi,
Berukhe sannaton se
Chhoo kar apne haathon se meri ungliyon ko,
Jaan daal do badan mein
Sukoon do rooh ko
Kahan ho tum?
Intezaar hai, tumhara –
Lamha-lamha bujhti zindagi ko!

]

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16 Comments »

  1. Raja,I was not able to understand a thing! please iska matlab bhi samjha do 😦

    Comment by Kanupriya — May 7, 2007 @ 3:48 AM

  2. main samajh gayi what it means B-)

    Comment by Kanupriya — May 9, 2007 @ 10:52 PM

  3. ab mujhe bhi samjhaao B-)

    Comment by . R.A.J.A . — May 10, 2007 @ 8:29 AM

  4. tumne likha, aur tumhe hi matlab nahin pata! 😮

    Comment by Kanupriya — May 11, 2007 @ 3:29 AM

  5. a beautiful cryptic poem 🙂

    Comment by JustSo — May 11, 2007 @ 4:37 AM

  6. @Kanu:aami likhi ni, anubhav korechhi@Arpana:Thanks

    Comment by . R.A.J.A . — May 11, 2007 @ 6:04 AM

  7. and ur feelings become words by themselves? 😮

    Comment by Kanupriya — May 11, 2007 @ 7:08 AM

  8. that’s a difficult question. I’ll answer ‘later’ B-)

    Comment by . R.A.J.A . — May 11, 2007 @ 10:26 AM

  9. abe kya leekha hai…:O :O :O

    Comment by Samyak — May 11, 2007 @ 1:16 PM

  10. you didn’t understand? ask any of the two who have understood :-p

    Comment by . R.A.J.A . — May 11, 2007 @ 2:22 PM

  11. i commented here in the morning :O

    Comment by Voice — May 13, 2007 @ 10:28 AM

  12. Nope. I didn’t get any mail for that. I got your comment in the other blog

    Comment by . R.A.J.A . — May 13, 2007 @ 10:29 AM

  13. ab yeh kya hai raja!![:D]

    Comment by Aurora — May 16, 2007 @ 7:50 AM

  14. hi Indrajitu have a very nice blog.I have a blog, toohttp://rozaana.blogspot.complease visit it sometime and leave ur valuable comments.cheers,Kanupriya

    Comment by Kanupriya — May 20, 2007 @ 11:02 PM

  15. Nice post… Hey you don’t blog anymore…? I miss reading 🙂

    Comment by Raajii — July 7, 2007 @ 7:52 PM

  16. 🙂 thanks a ton for this share!!! seems somebody else has written it … Anubhav or a girl (Arpana..)… i was little stumped by the depth in it.. brilliant piece…”The freedom of sky incarcerated in a solid blue wall
    I’ll paint sunset on your dawn” sounds like Gulzar….. lovely …. lovely!

    Comment by Sushmita — December 8, 2008 @ 12:23 AM


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